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February 14th, 2013, 9:00 am

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Reply coldhotshot, February 14th, 2013, 9:44 am

Hi! Kind of confused, in the 2nd panel, I see Haunshaul's hand pointing at the sign. However, in the first panel, it is Tyton that is talking to Rorschach. So I'm guessing that the bottom two speech bubbles are suppose to be pointing at Tyton, but they are directed to Haunshaul. Haunshaul(the author), can you help me clear this up, or am I just crazy here. I might just be crazy, because I see Rorschach flying upside down. Logic huh.

Anyways why are you so good at drawing Tyton frustrated. I'm assuming that he's frustrated, so I am guessing that you are the type of person who understands how does it feel to be frustrated. I'm just stating this as a point of information, but I can feel you convey the feeling of his frustration very well. However, I have forgotten how Tyton feels when he feels happy, can't wait till the team reaches Lavaridge town so I can see Tyton relaxed and joyful in the hot spring. :)

Reply Miles Hikari, February 14th, 2013, 10:24 am

Tytons eyes look dead.... Gordon and Rorschach broke him it seems.

Reply Haunshaul, February 14th, 2013, 10:31 am

@coldhotshot: In the second panel, it's still Ty and Rorschach talking, but I wanted to experiment with more off-screen dialogue. So they're talking while Haun is pointing out the signs like the helpful little Marshtomp he is. Sorry if it doesn't convey that very well. Still learning how to do these things myself. =P

Reply coldhotshot, February 14th, 2013, 12:31 pm

THIS IS MY PERSONAL OPINION, PLEASE DON'T TAKE IT AS ME OFFENDING YOU(author)! @Haunshaul: Thats fine then, it was just kind of confusing. I also like the change in background from the 2nd panel to the third, even though the 3rd panel's background is kind of bland, it gives off the feeling that this will take for ever kind of thing. But, I think that Haunshaul's hand was unnecessary as it kind of ruins the desert.

However, just out of curiosity, can I ask why did you decide to add a new sign for the 10 mile part, I mean wouldn't be funnier if you added it in small text(like kind of subtle and hard to see, then make the next panel a zoom? I don;t know as I don't, but in my opinion, it would look better as then it would give a more fun effect(which I am guessing that is what you are looking for, if not, completely disregard this question and advice). Any ways, the way you drew it shows off your own personal art style and it's good to experience.

I still wonder how did you draw Rorschach upside down, did you actually draw him upside down or did you just draw him up straight then turn the page? This is because, he actually looks well drawn in the first panel, his crazy, whacky attitude with a out of the world mind shown by his ability to fly flipped and this is also supported by his dialogue.

Reply Zelkova, February 14th, 2013, 12:48 pm

@Haunshaul: With context clues I easily guessed that Tyton and Rorschach were still talking (Though it seem like schools no longer teach context clues anymore based on past experience). The part that bugged me was the speech bubbles on that same panel. I don't read official comics that often anymore but shouldn't you read left to right while going down starting with the topmost layer of speech bubbles? Honestly I don't remember but I believe what I said is correct though I could be wrong.

Reply Zelkova, February 14th, 2013, 12:54 pm

Wow, coldhotshot now got me thinking about it, did you flip the page or drew him upside down naturally? That was pretty well done.

Maybe you should make a "how to draw Rorschach even upside down!" tutorial before the contest thingy ends.

Reply Haunshaul, February 14th, 2013, 3:06 pm

@Zelkova: I wanted to incorporate Haun pointing at the sign, since that's what he does, and obviously the sign itself. Because of that, I was sort of limited in the formatting of the speech bubbles, so I sort of bent the rules of order. That's why I compensated by moving the second half of each one as far away from the first halves as possible, to make it easier to read. Oh well, live and learn

@coldhotshot: I drew that like a month ago, but almost positive I didn't flip it. I might have turned the screen upside down for the mouth but I know for a fact the body and most likely the eyes were drawn with the orientation you see now.

Reply Jetta Bloodeye, February 14th, 2013, 5:11 pm

HEY LOOK His nose shrank!

Reply starelement, February 14th, 2013, 6:57 pm

omg His nose did shrink!!!

Reply Miles Hikari, February 14th, 2013, 10:06 pm

@Jetta Bloodeye: Looks the same to me

Reply coldhotshot, February 14th, 2013, 10:58 pm

@Jetta Bloodeye: Same here

@Zelkova: I would pay $50 to attend

@Haunshaul: you, sir, are talented

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